Midnight Reaper

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Real World:
Name:  Carter Shadows
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Personality:
before brain brust: I'm a scared boy who is never calm and who is extermely jittery.I would do want anyone wanted if they just if you put up your fists.
After brain brust: I acquire more confidence.I was able to stand up for my self and was able to gain friends.I was no longer scared of everything I was tough
History: I was bullied for years a nd years.I would walk home with cut on my neck and arms. They would harass me by jabbing my neck and kicking me in my ribs. I would tell someone but the principal was there leader's father.So there was no where I could hind, I meant nowhere I live next to most of them.I wish I could just disappear for this world so everyone and everything could leave me alone forever!
But one day, They pushed me down the stairs and the doctors said I was lucky to survive.When I got out of the Hospital The Bullies said i was trying to pick a fight with them then I fell down on my own fault.I felt so small.
I thought about suicide many times but now it felt like the anwser.Thanks to the new girl Max who thought there was no way I was violent and she help me though this horrible time in my life.We became friend I quess, Then she showed me brain brust and gave me thing long speech about if i want to leave this world behind and about if I want to accelerate.So I accept to make her stop talking.
That night I had a nightmare were I was running from the bullies then i was surrounded by complete darkness.I felt calm like there was nothing to harm me for once.When I woke up I found the dark to be calming.
Points of Distinction:
Brain Burst Avatar:
Brain Burst Name: Midnight Reaper
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Explanation: His look comes from his desire to disappear  
Parent: Max [siver doll]
Stats:
Melee-2200
Ranged-100
Defense-1100
Speed-1800
Dexterity-1400
Killer Gauge-1400
killer move
-Name: Dark void
-Cost: 75% KG
-Description+Effect: A dark hole comes from the scythe that sucks in everything in a 2.5 m radius around me.This is AoE attack .
-Weakness: Heavy armor or not standing in the area of attack
Armament
-Name: forced midnight
-Description: A black scythe with a jagged  blade that cause maximum ripping power
-Effect:An increase in speed and melee power by 500 each

Spoiler:

[Platinum Blader]

The trauma ain't clear at all, nor is the dream. How does it relate to the Reaper theme? And that scythe... how the hell does it create black holes? This char, frankly does not work so far. Many things you'll have to rework.

[Dranes]

The name is also uh...weird, especially for the setting.

[R4yleonard]

Reaper symbolize Death, not darkness. you should rework the history. And make your history more readable, it's like jumbled words to me, every words and sentence doesn't seem to fit with each other

[Destination]

It's been over two months. This app is going to Staff Office archives. Reactivate upon request.

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